Sunday, February 18, 2007

"LUV U MY LIFE"

Now the othr day i juzz sat down on my study table wid the full determination 2 study bt dunno no wt struck me..n i ws lost in a "LUVY DUVY" world n instantly in 10mins i wrote this down...so hr it goes, juzz sm random thots...i knw itz stupid...bt wantd 2 share it wid ma frnds ...pls kindly bare wid it......


"LUV U MY LIFE"

Holding on to my breath,how often do I ponder,
Whether Iam in my senses or not,still hanging on tite to the clutches of tym,
I relent incessantly to b wid u,music seems ringng in my ears,
The magical feelng keeps on poundng profoundly in my heart
Aah dunno knw wtz struck me,neither thnkng abt d future,
Holdng to the truth that, U r the one whom I had been longng 2 get al my life,
The days & nites nowadays hve just bcum a barren stretch widout ur feel in it,
Luvng u now n 4 alwyz is what I intend 2 do al my lyf,irrespectve of wat cums & goes,
Missng u must b a momentary sign 2 show how much u count in my lyf,
But if one day U ask me 2 put down in a single word about ur place in my heart,
Without hesistatng evn a bit i would answer..........
U R MY LIFE.........
LUV U MY LIFE................LUV U IMMENSLY.........

Hmmmm done wid it.....watta say frnds!!!!!!!!!!!

20 comments:

Neeraja said...

The only thing which strikes immediately after reading this is the fact that u love him so much..and to what extent.I actually wasnt aware of it till i read this..coz u hardly talked abt him.I only hope u have a very very smooth ride on this new wave :)

Madhavi said...

Hmmm Kishie dnt knw wtz struck me suddnly thots r buildng up aise hi...ya i knw i nvr hum his nme shoo much bt stl..dnt knw..shayad dis is indee luv bt lts c whrz it gonna tk me..n him ofcoz...waise thxsoos 4ur commnt luv ya >D<

Vandita said...

cheri darling .... first things first im sorry to be commenting soo late but u know i had read this long time back
anyways...i sincerely wish for u to never ever experience life to be a barren stretch with or without his feel.... :) >:D<
and ya needless to mention its beautifully written, has he read?
lotsa luv
vands

Madhavi said...

4 Dams
This blogpage is really a dodo whn mine opens ur doesnt.nwyz actly main thng ws ws anticiptng ur commnt coz ur wr d 1st 1 to officially read ma poem nwyz luvd ur commnt i also pray 4 d sme which u pray 4..wish u d sme luck..Luv ya lods..n btw he has nt yet read(i hve nt told him abt this at al)

garu_2189 said...

beautifully written mads...i really dunno much about the two of u but ur love for him is clearly evident..i hope u get all the happiness that u deserve..

Madhavi said...

Garu..sweetie first mein a biggg bear hug 4 u >D< coz ur commnt cme unxpctdely..thxs a lot sweetie...wish u d sme hapiness..& flow of luv thruout ur life..Luv ya mwhz..mads

tashu said...

smebody gonna xplain hu is dis HIM?????

Madhavi said...

tash bache,
i hve explnd it u fully fledged scrp aur ab pareshaan mat kr n go on commnt on d poem!!

tashu said...

ohhh dear ankur ke liye..i get it....mast hai...bahut muah muah types....lolz

Madhavi said...

u'l never sudhro na..bt luv ya d way u r..nwyz baki sab padh k b commnt de dena..Hugs

saptarshi said...

Heard melodies are sweet, those unheard are sweeter.
Hmmm lemme c...a poem explicitly written down with a perfect absence of slightest bit if harmony of being rhyming.But thoughts when put down to words indeed express much more than could have been said.Indeed maddy excellently written down; I rather envy ankur on this note...a perfect love, trust me one cannot be better in any other way.
The emotions expressed in the poem, are indeed something that needs much of appreciation and obvious a salutation...
maddy u r simply great in expressing your emotions, and only sum1 dumb can ever turn u around 4 once. believe me i wud love to get a GF like u...hey no hurt intended to ishqi...(i guess i could not find sum1 better than her...).
madz! kip up this flare of writing and i juzz hope ki sumtym or other u do get watevr u wnt 4rm lyf...
aur rahi baat barren stretch ki, woh kabhi nahi aaye tumhare lyf mein.lekin 1 piece of bhashaan"ek word mein itnaa sab kuch kabhi express nahi kiya jaa sakta hai mady"lifetime lag jaataa hai kuch words kehne mein."but agar u need to tell sumthng thn do go 4wrd.hum log sab hai to support u all thru...
luvly poem.
but padhayee chor ke poems...kab sudhroiing u???
tc buds...

Madhavi said...

Sapu da......my gwddddddddd itna bada commnt bt srsly thxs frm d bottom of my heart ..i do hope al ur prayers do cm true n myslf wnt it 2 happen :) jaldi ho 2 acha hai..n abt bein ur gf :P no offences no probs haha...i knw u r lucky 2 hve ishqie...shez one of her kind & really spcl...n she also damn lucky 2 hve u....n thxs 4 pepng me up..arrey ya shud i shudro..u al luv me d luv im na..so ...hehe...ya wl study n tc 2..
U 2 tk cr...

anonme said...

mads.. u are are really mad mad maddy sweet as a candy!!
that poem my dear! why don u write more?? :)

"The days & nites nowadays hve just bcum a barren stretch widout ur feel in it"

very sweet mads! loved it!!

Madhavi said...

Hehe Aks...
Okay baba wil write more of poems..provided i gt some words to play with :P...n ty ty for al d complis

♥bμşγ-ŵŗϊŧēŕ♥ said...

Open the windows fast! All the mushy-ness here is suffocating me!

:P

Bubbles of FireWhiskey said...

you know mads. reading this, i feel you deserve so much better... and just wait for the right time, sweets...

*~*Sameera*~* said...

Oh sweetie!You have loved with all your heart but maybe fate has something much better lined up for you.Never feel sad that you had loved that person cause your love was true and the moments beautiful,even if they are not in your life anymore.

Beautiful poem,touched a chord!Hugsss

The 'Mad' Orchid said...

@ Busy
hve opened the window thts even the love along wid the mush escaped :P ;)was kidding Glad u liked it sweets

The 'Mad' Orchid said...

@ Mann
hmmm maybe ur right sweetie..n me too hve realised so hve moved on.. :)

The 'Mad' Orchid said...

@ Sammy
Thanks babes :) glad u liked it so very much.. ya i know ur rite anyways ive moved realising it babes :)
hugs rite back to u